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thats a first

Your doing a very good job bringing this kind of quality on NG. Or maybe your doign yourself short but hey:p

About the mix though. Your drums fade away in the guitar its wall of sound. Either compress them more to get a more punchier sound. or maybe a little more volume on the overal drum group is not a bad idea either.

The weird synthy sound at the end somewhere. Its cool but its not... know what I mean ? :p its a bit akward lets just keep it to that.

also your bas guitar could be more punchier. Maybe add some around 700Hz in the EQ for more finger detail.

I can ramble on for another 500 pages but I think I said the most important things :D

Keep it up, you got skills.

Hyper-Freak92 responds:

I don't know what synthy sound everyone keeps talking about. The only synth part written was a string synth. Is that the part you mean?

The wall of sound does perhaps swallow up the drums a bit, but I think compressing the drums to give them more punch would intrude upon the sound. It's a lesser of two evils.

As for the bass, I actually do agree. When this gets played live, it'll be EQ'd to come through rhythmically a bit better. I may add that to the list of mixing changes to do before the album release.

Thanks for being legitimately constructive. I love the guy who 7'd me because Funk isn't his favorite genre of music (Idiot.)

Thanks for the review, and I look forward to more from you!

~Wes

Thanks for actually being constructive

Thats the stuff

Now thats what i wanna hear more on NG

God I'd die to remix it :D

not bad but a long way to go

oi I like the drums and all but the hi hat hurts mate!

Don't really knw what to say

pretty akward track if you ask me :p

Dunno what to say really hahaha

alright

Dunno if Zelda would be happy with this :p

I dont like the sounds you used sorry :p

the echo is pretty nice though

Nice one

I like this style,

ow for the advice ... yeah uhm Do not master! Its a very hard process that only true mastering engineers with masterng gear can preform. Just put a limiter at the end to boost your level and maybe a delicate EQ to make it a little less muddy. The hi hat is not bad could maybe use some EQ as well. Intro is ok. Conclusion is uhmmm well a bit sudden. Drum fills especially the snare is sometimes very loud that it clouds the rest. and the piano lower tones are in extreme legato. maybe make it a bit more tight.

if these are your roots. Go back as fast as you can :p

Marks-a-lot responds:

OOOooo, YES, these are the things that I wanted too hear! thank you so much for the review. Hopefully if I can get this song down it will be a hit.

Rayman Raving rabbits :D

sound like some thing from the game raving rabbits.

Did you add some kind of extreme compression? sounds 'fat'

not really my style but the overal quality of your work is alright!

Oh and thanks for the review earlier!

Scrogginaut responds:

Chow i jsut submitted another song I did awhile back called STATE MISC http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/194816 its a way different style of you wanna check it out

Nice man, but don't be such a pain :p

I really enjoyed you composition! which VSTs are those?

everything exept the drums, (they sound bad but I am spoiled when it comes to drums) , Sounds really nice. A nice drum sequence and maybe some Bass and It would be perfect.

But your comment is sort of ruining it. If you like what you make thats good enough for. You said yourself that you do no care about fans and what other people think... So do not bother to write a story about it then just do you thing I'd say.

Listen to my own tracks, your nto the only one who likes experimental haha.

Keep on going and fix the drums :D

Syntrus responds:

I'm not changing my drums:) send me a pm if you want to know the vst's I used.

Not a fan -_-

Hip Hop... not my thing :p but Since I am the head engineer of a Hip hop Studio I have to give some credit :p

Did you really put a robot FX on the chorus or is it just phasing really bad :P?

also your delays are a bit dodgy:p they dont sound like part of the beat.

your one of a kind on newgrounds I supose!

mseemercury responds:

i record at home and i dnt know what you mean dodgy and the chorus is two different voices

You neeeeed reverbbbbb

Love the glitches in your drums! big fan of that. if you did that yourselves though.
However you neeed reverb on at least the piano. cause this sound like a cellphone right now:p

klic responds:

Thanks, I did do the glitches myself, i also added reverberation as was your suggestion.

Audio & Music is pretty much all I care about!

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