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Thats nice

That is quite a list of gear you got there!

Surely did not expect that. I like the track. It still misses some structure and it sounds a bit dry concerning the mix Some more additive FX would be in place.

Catch ya later

XTREEMMAK responds:

Gotcha. I'll check into that. I was just thinking about more lines to add as well while driving today lol.

Thanks for the help man! I really appreciate it :)

Make some full tracks man :D

Seriously. you got all these potential loops laying around get it together and make song is all there is left to do for you :D

Spine therapist

Gonif responds:

haha thanks

:D
yeah i gotta work on demz
cept i got soo much school work i dont gots time
D:

this is some real D&B

Relaxing and Crazy at the same time.

yeah man definitly some good work. Normally I ramble on about the frequency spectrum and over compression etc. But I dont wanna now... I just wanna bounce for a bit :p

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Lucovic responds:

Thanks a lot dude, keep bouncing out there ^^

its mp3!

It quite repetative. the piano is a nice touch but has a hard time blending in.

uhm... about the surround. its a STEREO file (2 way) :p you can listen to it on a 5.1 but it will not make much of a difference. cause its not encoded and probably not mixed in in a 5.1 panning system.

Try making a song out of it. Its a good start though :)

Spine therapist

ndustry responds:

THANKS FOR THE FEED BACK I PLAN TO UPGRADE ALOT THIS YEAR AND BRING WAY HARDER JUST GOT INTO THIS STYLE LAST YEAR. THE SURROUND SOUND WAS LOL FOR WHOM EVER WAS LISTENING. TAKE IT EASY AND I DIG YOUR WORK AS WELL

hope indeed

I think your concept works very well. Its just that I do not really like the drum sounds. Sounds a bit out of place. The rhythm is cool but the sound u used are not.

the guitarish sound is quite nice to the ears. The synth is cool but is very low i the spectrum and sometimes you cannot hear the the detail of the low end.

Keep on going!

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julessmokespot responds:

Yo thanks man! I know its not perfect yet im still messing around a bit with it actually. But i'll try to make it better.

Pretty nice

I like that you give away these details about how you made it. gives me a better insight. I gotta say, I am not a big fan of house music. But it sound ok actually.

The mixing is pretty nice. A well balanced and safe track. At some points I wish the echo piano thing to be a bit louder. But that is very subjective though.

SOme part make me loose intrest sometimes but that is probably cause I am not a fan of house music.

PS: Camel Phat rocks

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DrDIL responds:

Thanks Spine,

Good review. I hope to see more of these in the portal :) Nice to hear that you liked it even though you are not a fan of the genre.

I kept the piano at this level because it had some volume issues I think. You wouldn't hear it, but on the mixer it went up from around -8 dB to -4 dB so I had to tone it down. However, I think the mastering kind of squished it though. But then again this is my first half-decent mastering work on a track so ;p

Thanks anyway! :D

Overcompression

Dunnow what limiter your using but its too harsh!

the kick blows away the rest of the music :o
Also adding glitches is not mastering! thats composing or remixing

I liked the Idea and some of the filters are nicely done but try sticking to your own tracks man I'm sure you'll get more attention that way then this.

Spine Therapist

FuNDaMeLoN responds:

Sorry about that - it was just the crappy DAW i was using to make... remix this song. Thanks for the review.

Lovely

Yup this one is kinda really good as well.
The whole composition is really nice!

the mix is not bad but at some points it feels a bit too middy. maybe a little less mids will do wonders.

And about fruity loops. well its a sequencer and everything is said. In my opinion you rely on external plug ins a lot when using that program in comparison to some more advanced sequencers. But whatever works right :D?

Spine therapist

LLAAPPSSEE responds:

Thanks man. Lovin' your reviews.

Yeah, the mix is potentially muddied. It works for what I was going for though, I feel it counteracts the scratchy percs. Accidents are muddy.

Heh, I'm not sure what your saying about FL. However, yes, i do rely on external plug-ins. I cant remember the last time i actually even bothered to look for sound in FL, haha. No thanks : P

I've been wanting to get Abelton Live!

GO AWAY!

leave NG and never come back :p

Third track I hear now and I just saw you made a massive music library in one year. Did you make all that in one year? cause that is kind of hard to believe unless you do this for a living :)

Anywayz. Not gonna give it a ten cause something seems missing. Some parts of the track sound like a background track to something. but that something is not there.

Also I found a flaw in the mixing ( FInally) haha. There is a lot of low mids int he mix. If you were to put an EQ on the master bus and put a so called Smile EQ on it. I think it will sound a bit more delightfull. Try taking down 500 Hz for about 2 or 3 dB with a Q factor of 0.5. That should do the trick.

Spine therapist

LLAAPPSSEE responds:

Haha. Aw, leave NG? I probably should.

I did not make that all in one year. Most if it yes. Some of my earlier submissions are from 2 - 3 years ago.

Something missing? Not sure what. Its just supposed to be a light and airy song. Minimal and such.

As far as the mix goes - i actually have a remastered version of this up. Check it out : P

I appreciate your in depth reviews - its really awesome. You seem to know a lot more about mastering then i do, too. I'm going to look for this 'smile EQ' as well. When you say i have a lot of low mids in the mix, heh, im not even quite sure what you mean. I understand what low mids are, but i'm not sure how it effects the product? Check out the remaster and see if i fixed it!! : D

(i went back and listened to the remastered version - i think i know what you mean - i just probably cant state it as clearly as you do, haha. I think it may be fixed. The low-mids muffle up the track a bit, yes?)

I dig it haha

Linkin park.... not really :p

Venetian snares,
Squarepusher,
scotch egg,

Those are the guys you remind me off

The glitchy sound is lovely and it sound really professional. And I am even impressed by the mix. that does NOT happen often. A lot of people are good at composing but suck at mixing but this is done very nicely.

There is one thing though, I pressed 10 untill I hear the synth after 3 minutes. A sort of squarewave simple synth. In my humble opinion it drags down the quality of the track. The filter and so on you used on it are very nice though. but the sound of teh synth itself is not to my liking.

Srry about your fav piano player :)

Spine Therapist

LLAAPPSSEE responds:

Hehe. Thanks to someone for really saying some of my influences for once : P

Love'em.

I'm glad you like my sound man. Even more that you think it's got a professional sound to it. That makes me feel pretty good. I've been working a lot with mixing tracks. Its very important.

Heh heh, didnt like the synth, eh? I guess some people will like it and others wont? Now i'm worried if you listen to some other songs. I've been using that synth a good deal. Mixed a bit differently however.

Yeah, i'll have to get over it. E.S.T was a really amazing trio. : (

take it easy, man. Thanks for listening.

Audio & Music is pretty much all I care about!

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